What do you think of my poem?

Good work my friend but I don't see the point clearly. I see points rather and it makes me speculate perhaps unfairly about what you mean. For instance, the doubter (the speaker) wants to make her friend realize the pain and torment "that lies before" her. It is not clear where the pain is from. Is it from the doubter or is it from another source. Perhaps to solve this, add another stanza to offer a little clue to aid the reader in appreciating it some more.